This is also, however, the first time I've heard of this supposed consensus. Hey, I never said it was a consensus, just giving my opinion. I just finished it, and I thought it was pretty poorly written, especially the descriptions and the anti-climatic ending, but had some great ideas. So you're no...

I second the Bookhouse Boys excitement. I was disappointed they didn't get more time on the show.

Okay, I'm going to be honest. I just read your treatment -and I was riveted! A lot of your Cooper dialogue is fantastic -thank god! Much better than I can do. Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I'm really proud of this structure, and loved reading it in script form. It completely revitalized me -I was ...

I have to join the group of 14 year olds... I first saw Twin Peaks when they re-aired the first season before the second season premiere. My parents had heard about it from friends so we sat down to watch as a family... which is a little weird upon reflection. NOt your typical family viewing! I Thin...

I finished up scripting episode 2.14... there were a couple of places where I wasn't sure I interpreted it right, especially what happens at Margaret's cabin. So you might want to check...

enjoy...

http://amonitrate.googlepages.com/episode2.14

don't forget the Smoked Cheese Pig.

and wasn't there a leg of lamb? Though being vegetarian...

Act one of Ep 3.02, up on the internets...

However, I was playing around with a template and when I transferred it to the web some of the formatting was goofy, namely no ALL CAPS in many places.

But it's readable.

http://amonitrate.googlepages.com/episode3.02

CREAMED CORN

ah, I'm terrible at subplots, which is why I admire your work here so much.

This could work if Albert knows the past, but Harry doesn't. More alluding to Caroline, perhaps he finally tells Audrey -and when he does name her in the series, he takes Windom's Queen in an agressive play, comes back to his room and finds the Caroline mask, "breathtaking wasn't she, Dale?&qu...

"Instead the chessgame is a tactic used to pyschological draw Cooper in so he can get him vulnerable and weakened enough to enter the lodge in a state that Earle can take his soul. Ultimately, Earle doesn't care about the chess game, it was just a device to set Cooper up" Well, this is how...

Audrey, you are a writing machine!

Here's the full 3.01 script. Note, new address...

http://amonitrate.googlepages.com/episode3.01


Hope you like it!

I'm still typing away at 2.14, but I wanted to finish the premiere since you had it done...

thanks:) I'm glad you're feeling better. I think you don't get bogged down by exposition very much at all, the way you've paced this one. BTW, I went back and caught up on all the episodes. Nice stuff. I especially was taken with the idea of Cooper being physically effected (bleeding, fainting) afte...

okay! Added Act Three to the script for episode 3.01 here:

http://amonitrate.googlepages.com/season3premiere

hope it's a-okay.

I hope you feel better. Ick!